Friday, 28 August 2015

Writing Simile

THE CLOWN IN THE  TOWN

Once in a land not far from town but in a dark place there was a rusty house as rusty as an old rusty car. And in that house was a clown. No one knows if it is a boy or girl but the clown’s name was Rumble.

His dad wants Rumble’s name to be Rusty but Rumble did not want to be that name. I don’t know why but it’s a good name. He got Rumble his name from his best rock star.

Rumble wants his dad to be like him but he doesn’t. That’s fine and all I guess but something was missing… HIS CAR!!! It was gone by the time 8.00 and that was the time for work.

He didn’t know if he should ask his boss but he did.
The boss shouted, “ WE’LL GET A NEW CAR AND YOU BETTER NOT BE LATE FOR WORK!!!!!!. and…. YOU ARE  FIRED!!! “
By the time 10.14 the clown who is now no longer the clown  got very very ANGRY AND WENT HOME.

He ripped up the ground and he had no ground then he got back the job. He made people happy for the rest of his life.

Sam


Thursday, 20 August 2015

Subtraction by Spitting Numbers

My answer is right. I have to remember to make a tidy ten

Thursday, 21 May 2015

Making a Connection

I am learning to make a connection between characters in a story. I found words in the story to help me. I did this well.

Monday, 11 May 2015

Writing a Procedure

I am learning to write a procedure about making ANZAC biscuits. I wrote all of the instructions in order. It was tricky putting the instructions in order.

Tuesday, 17 February 2015

Welcome to Room 17

This year i am with Mrs Rist. She is the beast. I am good at riper rugbey. I amlooking forward to being in room 9 when i am older. This year i am good at working by myself i am good at reading.