THE CLOWN IN THE TOWN
Once in a land not far from town but in a dark place there was a rusty house as rusty as an old rusty car. And in that house was a clown. No one knows if it is a boy or girl but the clown’s name was Rumble.
His dad wants Rumble’s name to be Rusty but Rumble did not want to be that name. I don’t know why but it’s a good name. He got Rumble his name from his best rock star.
Rumble wants his dad to be like him but he doesn’t. That’s fine and all I guess but something was missing… HIS CAR!!! It was gone by the time 8.00 and that was the time for work.
He didn’t know if he should ask his boss but he did.
The boss shouted, “ WE’LL GET A NEW CAR AND YOU BETTER NOT BE LATE FOR WORK!!!!!!. and…. YOU ARE FIRED!!! “
By the time 10.14 the clown who is now no longer the clown got very very ANGRY AND WENT HOME.
He ripped up the ground and he had no ground then he got back the job. He made people happy for the rest of his life.
Sam
3 comments:
You have used many interesting words to describe your clown and you've included a simile. I like how you have introduced your story. Well done.
Great work! on your clown story!
Well done Sam! Very good describing.
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